You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book.
Write a letter to him/her. In your letter:
* apologize for the mistake
* find out how important the book is to him/her
* say what you will do
Jason,
How are you? How was your vacation? I am so excited to hear about your trip to your home. I hope it was fantastic than you have planned. Besides, I want to apologize to keep your textbook with me that I have borrowed from you last semester.
Actually, I was unable to meet you after our exam because, I heard that you left the exam hall much earlier than the actual time to rush to catch your flight for your trip. Thus, I happen to keep the book with me. Were you able to manage to complete the vacation assignment using softcopy of the book? I know it is sometimes very difficult to refer the softcopy to finish the assignment. I have a quick catch up with Janie who lives nearby to your accommodation, on my way, I am interested to stop by you room to give the book.
Once again sorry mate for my mistake
Yours lovingly
Saka
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39375 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32135971739 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3568040036 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9090909091 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333714956564 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130472888374 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750143846431 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205860447029 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119609071548 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.