The word Curriculum is the plan or the process that leads the every child to complete their educatioin in the perfect manner to lead the life in the perfectly.We al know that without a proper plan we can't able to enjoy our one day in our life then coming to our education also we need the proper planing in order to lesd the life in the perfect manner.The whole Planning cam be done with the proper curriculum from the initial stages of the education only.Then coming the Issue mentioned Curriculum should be the same for the all the children those who are studying the below the college level.Wihch leads many positives and negitives.
If the curriculum is same for the entire county will leads to develop the every child from the every corner of the country and thier will be differene between the student who are studing in the cities and in villages.Then will leads to proper foundation to every child in the country.Which allows to motivate people towords the education.Then the we can able to improve the facilities in the villages also as the fgacilities in the cities,leads to develop the villages also. BY curriculum is same for the entire nation the which leads to develop on the childern those who are in the backward areas and the families those parents are not well educated,by this point they will have the clear clarity how to study and what to study.
On the other hand if the curriculum is same for total nation which leads to restrict the learning abuliuty in the chirlder those who are over smart and those who had the capacity of learning more. This piont of difference will mainly observed in the developed country in the world.In the deveploed country of the world the compitition will be very high for the future devolopment of the children,then inorder to overcomr the compitition then the child should have some different calliber.By the same curriculcum througout the world the emthussium in the childern will decrese and they wil be restrict to that point only.This leads to the failure not only for the children but also for the complete future of the Nation.
But by comparing the situations in the many countires of the world the single curriculum for whole nation should be perfferd.In order to decrese the scan the the educational socities are doing and how the parents in the present are falling inthe hands of these corrupted educational institutions without knowing the capacity of their child.Then it will help the people to compare the conditioin of the school in many ways.Then we can able to control the eductional scams in the many counties of the world.The main point I am mentioning is that many schools will promote of the admissions that we had the special curriculum in our school which will leads to develop your child in future and ask for the extra fee and many other factor.Then the parents cant able to conclude that where they want to join our child.Then without knowing the capabulity of the child parents will join in the school which costs high and with extra curriculum. The child had capablity to study to do in proper manner, if he can't compete with others the he will be mentally damaged which leads to suicide.A very dangerious problem for the Nation.
Then finally i conclude the nation one curriculum will leads the county to develop in equally from every part of the country.Which had the capabulity of developing the every coroner of the country.There are many countrie in the world who followed this process and got succuess in the developmet of their country.This development may not be observed immediatelly it will take the more time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, then, thus, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2993.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 621.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81964573269 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6556586645 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.38808373591 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 938.7 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 23.0359550562 334% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 237.978465412 60.3974514979 394% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 374.125 118.986275619 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.625 23.4991977007 330% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 7.80617977528 564% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146279568722 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902899791994 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311802022541 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944568497683 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277997524351 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.1 14.1392134831 284% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 48.8420337079 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.1 12.1743820225 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.86 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.8971910112 479% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 11.2143820225 292% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 11.7820224719 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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