The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The mentioned bar graph illustrates the data about three main exports of Southland namely international tourism, dairy products and meat products in past years, present scenario and prediction for future: 2000, 2018 and 2025 respectively.
Overall, as is presented by the bar graph, it can be seen that international tourism is in growing trend from the past to future whereas export of dairy products show the fluctuating nature. Moreover, the gradual decrement in export of meat products is observed from 2000 to 2025.
It is evident that in 2000 international tourism had dominated other exports($8 billion) which is followed by dairy products approximately ($7 billion) and meat products exactly ($6 billion). Similarly, at present (2018) dairy products have reached nearly the peak while international tourism is lagging behind by around ($1 billion) from tourism. Likewise, meat products have significantly low rate of exports with only near about ($5.5 billion).
However, in 2025, tourism industries will account the highest ratio and almost reach the summit ($10 billion).Moreover, it is forecasted that dairy products will slightly decrease by near about half billion and will have figure of approximately ($9.5 billion). In addition, it has been already claimed that meat products are going to decline moderately and reach ($5 billion) in near future.
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The given bar graph
The given bar graph illustrates the number of Southland which were earned money from international tourism, dairy products and meat products in 2000 and 2020 as well as future projection 2025.
It can be clearly seen that, there will be earned money from international tourism which was 10 billion pounds in 2025. While, there is the nine billion pounds earned money by international tourism in 2020 but only 8 billion pounds earning from global in 2000. Further, there is highest source of income from dairy products in 2020 which is 10 billion pounds, whereas after five years it will be slightly dropped in 2025 approximately 9.5 billion pounds. But,in 2000, the least of income source from same products which was 7 billion pounds.
Movie further,the maximum earned money to meet product in 2000 (6 billion pounds) however, this product fell in the year 2020. But, lowest money earned from meat products after five years.
overall, it interesting to note that, the higher income from dairy products in 2020 and future projection 2025 while, from meat products lower earning income in various years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4854368932 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90304250123 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558252427184 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1964815351 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.25 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.23603664747 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103258420359 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587628191091 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544109166944 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852897341941 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607946750304 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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