Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live.
There is no doubt that both with and without people everything in our world is changing. However, humanity leads these changes to be negative. I feel this way for the following two reasons.
First and foremost, pollution has become a vital problem which needs to be solved as soon as it possible. Nowdays everything is polluted; air, oceans, generally all environment. Inspite of the fact that there are some organizations who tries to solve this huge problem or even nature itself tries to recover, the problem is constantly becoming unsolvable. Because of pollution there are some fish and animal species that are on the edge of becoming extinct. It affects people’s health either. in some countries because of the high level of smog people have to wear masks which will help them not to get any infection with lungs.
Secondly, no less indispensable reason is that the food we eat becomes worse. There is no shadow that the population is growing in number which is a reason of production food in great amounts. Organizations producing food in order to produce it in larger amounts use other deleterious ingridients such as paper or even plastic. This is mostly common in such countries like America or China. Of course, this can cause some diseases related to stomach. It goes without saying that no one should it such kind of food.
In addition to this, global warming is an unsolvable issue either. the ice in Artarktica is melting not only because the earth is becoming much closer to the sun, but also because of the people’s activites. And this is an undisputable fact. That’s why scientists have been searching for another planet for life for many years. However, now this idea can’t be implemented, but scientists try to do their best in order to give humanity a better place to live.
In the light of the aforementioned reasons I can vehemently declare that human activity is making the earth hazardous place to live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in addition, kind of, no doubt, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93051359517 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75024715299 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592145015106 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0919608858 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7142857143 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7619047619 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13040681589 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350537515536 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100836746068 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119137888025 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171866430864 0.0645574589148 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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