The pie charts compare emissions by economic sector and by gas type globally in 2014

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The pie charts compare emissions by economic sector and by gas type globally in 2014.

The pie charts describe global greenhouse gas emissions by economic sector and by gas in 2014.

Over all, the major part of gas evolve from emissions by gas is carbon dioxide whereas balance can be seen in economic sector with emission of electricity and heat production, agriculture and forestry and industry.

First pie chart i.e Emissions by economic sector is majorly taken by the combination of electricity and heat production, agriculture and industry gasses(25%,24% and 21% respectively).

On the other hand 6%,10% and 14% of the gasses are releasing from transportation, building and other energies.

According to the second pie chart i.e Emissions by gas depicts the rule of carbon dioxide(fossil fuel) with 65%.

Rest of the emissions are due to nitrous oxide, methane and carbon dioxide(forestry) with the amount of 6%,16% and 11% respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, whereas, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43703703704 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14575072112 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1161222746 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427132920236 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230540914806 0.103423049105 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217410923364 0.0843802449381 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230540914806 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217410923364 0.0819641961636 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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