Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint?
It is said that every person ought to consider sharing a part of the earnings OR EARNT money for supporting people, who are needed FOR. This essay disagrees with this point due to A number of causes, which lead to the AWARENESS OF human rights and impossibility for some individuals commit such actions.
Firstly, non-profit-making activity should be voluntary, occurring with freedom not force by obligations. For some people charity makes sense for their life, whereas others do not see this necessary as it POSITIVELY contributes INto poverty/DESTITUTION. Secondly, mandatory taxation from the government and society in majority of countries is already high enough and a new insufficient tax can be hot-disputable in public and might be met without enthusiasm. Perhaps the fact of the matter is that members of ONE’s community struggle with expenses such as transportation’s and nutrition’s costs, spendings on children and housing, which swallow a considerable portion of their salaries. This IMPLIES a lack of their income they can not or do not want to spend on donation. In addition, it appears to be that people PERCEIVE “required” charity like paying bill, which is unfair and unpleasant process and they may feel their unsatisfied doing it. All these statements confirm the idea that if a financial assistance for others was free, it would enhance the wish of citizens to donate.
While it may be correct that a fixed amount of earnings from each human could increase investment in charity foundation, which in their queue might use these funding in solution of social issues. However, people tend to concern about their own problems rather than of the other’s needs.
Overall, It seems that compulsory billing/CHARGING for THE POVERTY-REDUCING contribution is not AN excellent measure for A larger side of population, so admittedly charity should be remained as A voluntary act of A private person.
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...hance the wish of citizens to donate. While it may be correct that a fixed amo...
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...ather than of the other's needs. Overall, It seems that compulsory billin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3680781759 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38592728837 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635179153094 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5554543472 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142242303647 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536183912958 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467101098271 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757149582583 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312536896 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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