Some people believe that to be successfully in sport you have to be physically strong. However, others think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views
The question of whether physical or mental strength is more important to achieve success in sport has been a matter of debate in recent times. While I agree that atheles need to be physically strong to help them win glorious victories, I believe that their mental state also play a crucial role in their performance.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that physical fitness is one of the secret key ingredients to althetic success. Firstly, it reduces the risk of suffering incident or serve injuries as well as brings the sport chance to those who had less or non-injured compares to those had more or full-injured. In fact, a vast number of athletes had to stop their career in some points because their body simply couldn’t hold up anymore. Secondly, improving muscular training is probably the quickest way to produce better performance. Once the muscular is trained, the body has the ability to increase not only power production but also muscular endurance.
On the other hand, when it comes to sport, having mental strength is nearly important for player as physical fitness. The main reason is sport psychology is a science field that gives support to competitors to deal with many aspects of life such as self-belief, pressure or concentration. Sometimes, the line between glory and notoriety is incredibly thin. Researchers have revealed that there were uncountable cases about players who had suffered sporting mental collapse hence the results were suicide.
In conclusion, we should live under the belief that both physical and mental strength have a vital importance to help the athletes to the pathway to success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether physical or mental strength is more imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13011152416 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76860093139 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7043787418 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259866234863 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799951640028 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769728979707 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157272296723 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680919166979 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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