College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
The author of the statement claims that taking a considerable amount of attention to job is highly crucial for students. While others believe that having a tremendous amount of interest is greatly essential. I agree with this claim. Consider this point and what follows my point would be delineated.
To begin with, we all of know that money is an indispensable criteria for triumph due to several reason. As a matter of fact, we know that with aid of money we can buy everything without any problem, arriving to my wishes would be near. As a result, all of student should select a field which it has a great deal of job in the society such as mechanical or electronic engineering. However, some majors in the college wouldn't be useful such as literature, mathematics and so forth. For instance, one of my friends has educated in the electronic engineering in the university. He became a wealth man in the society. This indicates that opting a field that has a plethora task in the community is greatly crucial without a shadow of doubt.
However, other believes that selecting a major in the university without interest has an excessive drawback. Indeed, they assert that devoid of avid and interest might lead to failing in the job owing to the fact that having a superb spirit with zealous soul is the most remarkable factor for success. For example, one of my sisters selected history in the college. In fact, we know that history and archaeology is considerably common in the community. Finding a proper job for it is very arduous. While, my sister has a great soul, inasmuch as, her selection was based on interest not job. As a consequence, taking heed to interest is a pivotal role for personality and spirit.
Moreover, there is a variety jobs that they have both feature. Indeed, some students select a specific major that they have a striking interest; in addition their major has a glut job after graduation. For instance, I select space science due to my favorite knowledge is corresponds to star, atmosphere, satellite and so forth. Besides, this major has a considerable amount mission and job in the community particularly in the current era that Space Science has advanced.
By taking into account, determining a field of study based on jobs would be worthwhile. Nonetheless, a modicum of interest has an adverse effect on success. By considering this fact, both criteria job and interest is vital for students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... to job is highly crucial for students. While others believe that having a tremendous...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'criterion'?
Suggestion: criterion
... of know that money is an indispensable criteria for triumph due to several reason. As a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...dispensable criteria for triumph due to several reason. As a matter of fact, we know that with...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n jobs would be worthwhile. Nonetheless, a modicum of interest has an adverse eff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88674698795 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81682521328 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503614457831 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2746348071 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.12 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163538897303 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439179719466 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690918032742 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950250047827 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566544963506 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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