Experts say that if older people exercise daily, they will be healthier and happier. However, many still suffer from a lack of fitness. What are the reasons for this? What actions can be taken to solve this problem?
It has been said that an elderly citizens could feel delighted if they follow a strict exercise regimen, although they do not follow regularly. This essay will suggest that lack of awareness could be the main reason for this situation, and possible solution may be made awareness by family members or closure relatives, followed by reasoned conclusion.
The possible reason for this would be that the deficiency of knowledge about the benefit of the workout. They are living in their own world thinking their life would be finished soon, unless anyone tells about the importance of exercise. Take some older citizens has a critical memory problem, they forget what they did in the previous day. Thus it can be seen that for their ageing their cautiousness decreased.
The possible solution for this would be kept breasting them about the ramification of the exercise regime. A family member may do this work properly because they are mostly dear to them. Even though with physically unfit an older family member because regular exercise can improve their circumstances, which will boost their confidence as well. For instance the researcher found that 80% of people exercises daily with health problem more live longer rather than other people. Therefore, it is important to make more aware of the elderly people for daily exercises.
In conclusion, in order to be lived happily and healthily, elder people should have the erudite about the benefit of exercise. It is pointed out that it is possible, if family people impart their time and knowledge with them about the importance of some kind of exercise for being fit.
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- Experts say that if older people exercise daily they will be healthier and happier However many still suffer from a lack of fitness What are the reasons for this What actions can be taken to solve this problem 67
- Experts say that if older people exercise daily they will be healthier and happier However many still suffer from a lack of fitness What are the reasons for this What actions can be taken to solve this problem 67
- Experts say that if older people exercise daily they will be healthier and happier However many still suffer from a lack of fitness What are the reasons for this what actions can be taken to solve this problem 84
- Experts say that if older people exercise daily they will be healthier and happier However many still suffer from a lack of fitness What are the reasons for this What actions can be taken to solve this problem 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
It has been said that an elderly citizens could feel delighted if they follow a s...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rget what they did in the previous day. Thus it can be seen that for their ageing th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08955223881 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50642969127 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2822596714 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31956763656 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116354265785 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051113210872 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19580911859 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332299707086 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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