These days, numerous elders distressed from motionless lifestyles, therefore, to be healthier and cheerful, professionals offer to them to do regular work out in their everyday lives. Lack of flexibility and sports facilities can be the prime reasons behind this trend. However, the situation can be reversed by following the appropriate measures.
To begin with, the reasons why older people do not do exercise daily could be the illness of joint and insufficient services, which can advance their health. It is obvious that when the person getting older, their joint started to deteriorate and losing their liquids, which helps the joints to move. As a result, the older person suffering from their joints and unwilling to do the physical movement. Another causes of it is scarce of sports halls, namely running road and gym. Because of insufficient places, which provides elders to run and do exercise, they may not do exercise regularly in their everyday lives even they desire to do. For instance, in Mongolia, many over the 50s reported in the survey of the physical health institution, there haven’t any places provide to do exercise, running and cycling.
Turning to possible solutions, the government must construct gym and sports services that can improve both the physical and mental health of elders. In other words, authorities should be funding the sports facilities, build new gyms and roads, which can be used for running and cycling. If there are sufficient facilities built, the person who old might be participating this due to their health condition. Moreover, elders can reduce this problem by their own hands. if they do exercises in their home regularly, taught by internet teachers, it is possible to be healthier and joyful. For example, in Asian countries, one recent study states that the elders usually provide them with exercise equipment and do exercises in their homes.
To conclude, the major cause of why elders do not do exercise is that their joints illness and lack of facilities, which can provide them to do work out. Funding physical facilities and doing exercise in their home will help them to be healthy and happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11299435028 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65060879087 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516949152542 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2608771415 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.470588235 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216186040264 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868649178439 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550163078677 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152592548642 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497862625015 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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