Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Personally, I strongly believe that in the past it was easier to identify what type of career of job would lead to a secure, successful future. Though some people may assume that it's always hard for people to decide which career is more "successful" than the others, I see some evidences that this would be rather easier in the past. I would explain my rationales in the following passages.
First of all, in the past, there are not so many jobs available for modest people, thus they could easily distinguish which would be most suitable for them. Plus the fact that most people are still working as farmers then, living in the villages leaves them no idea what is it like to be in a city or to be involved in other industry, like business or marketing. Furthermore, this phenomenon can be seen most obviously in women, who did not have much choices then. For instance, it is until 1970 in Taiwan that women started to engage in manufacturing goods in their own house. Before that, they were farmers, and do only domestic jobs.
Secondly, there is this constant idea about what a "successful" life should be for the elder generation. For example. my father used to say that working for the government is what is called a "golden job". In the past, and probably til now, there are a lot of people fancy the job in a government official, since they offer a stable and also great salary. It could be seen that people in the past is too conservative as well. They would rather earn stable money each month as a government official than rack a good fortune seasonally as a fisher or businessman.
The other rationale I would like to provide is that, nowadays it's really hard to identify the most secure and successful career because the world is constantly changing. Especially with the novel technology in the present, there are a lot of jobs created and a single position could also make a huge difference in the world.
In conclusion, I believe that it's easier to decide which career is more promising in the past since there were fewer options and some firm beliefs in choosing a career. While today we are given more choices in this ever-changing world, it is inevitable that making the decision would be harder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: an
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74045801527 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8187711282 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521628498728 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1245362652 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.588235294 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248839486266 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773307965003 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987692155121 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14637296466 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965316711702 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.