The bar chart reveals information about the amount of electricity produced and used by ten nations in the year 2014.
Overall, China and United states had the highest units of production and its consumption, whereas the lowest number of units was produced by Korea Rep. Surprisingly, Germany consumed more units than it produced.
To begin with, the amount of electricity generated and consumed in China was equally highest, about 5,398 billion KWh and 5,322 billion KWh, respectively, followed by United States with 4,099 billion KWh produced and 3,866 billion KWh consumed. Furthermore, Russia and Japan ranked third and fourth with around 1000 billion KWh produced and consumed, while corresponding figure of India and Canada was relatively lower, just 871 billion KWh generated and 698 billion KWh used, compared with 618 billion KWh produced and 500 billion KWh consumed, respectively.
In contrast, the amount of electricity used and generated in Korea Rep. was the lowest, with 450 billion KWh and 486 billion KWh, respectively, while the figures for France, Brazil, and Germany were slightly higher than Korea Rep. Surprisingly, Germany was the only country, that consumed electricity more than it was produced, consist of 582 billion KWh in comparison with 526 billion KWh.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39603960396 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73147125235 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7715488128 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0503201070582 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408426466786 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060125441112 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06520845791 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076420392824 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39603960396 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73147125235 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7715488128 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0503201070582 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408426466786 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060125441112 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06520845791 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076420392824 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.