In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
The media in current days has such an impact to every person life.The moment you step out of house people is always try cover you in any alternative way be it you are a celebrity or a person who is being raped or a thief.I totally agree with the speaker and would give some points to augment in support with the issue.
Firstly,The main cause of this is the modern use of technology,In the past,The media covers only the key issues like political,weather and society issues because in the present it focus mostly on the things like celebrity and any models or any fight going on a road.This is probably because we as a people encourage such attention.Even a boy falls in a path hole media covers it rather than help the child.It is not necessary that media needs to present at the situation people record it on mobile phone and give such coverage to highlight the matter.There was a poll which stated that 90 percent of the media coverage is no benefit to people rather than the increasing in t.r.p's to seek people attention.
In addition to that the people are also encouraging when they are covered like such as,The fandom is increased only if they appear publicly in that way only the media helps them doing things right from promoting a movie to winning in the elections most of the crucial role played is by them.Even the common man caught by an accident or drunk and drive case he is showcased on television for atleast 10 times.There was a case where in india a female attempted suicide as she was covered by media when she was teased by a group of people.There are many such cases which are in the lime light of people lives where they are scared to live with respect and dignity.
Secondly,The plethora of information is provided only by them right from the weather in united states to a person who died due to heart attack in hotel of dubai.This is covered just in minutes.However,it is necessary that every news is important doesn't mean each and every small thing is publicly got into notice.Even a women and men fighting on road is captured and they obviously would loose their identity.Although it was one time they appeared people notice anytime and they can't face the people and pressure as every individual starts gushing about them.One of the most annoying is they bring every social attention of a celebrity right he goes to walking in the morning till they go to sleep everyday life which is not necessary to people is focused.This doesn't give any privacy to them i mean they too are human beings i think everyone should respect the life of every individual.Before they cast the coverage they need to seek the permission no matter whoever the person is be it a common man or any social attention seeker.
In the conclusion,to sum up i think it is high-time people should respond back to anyone focussing or doing a coverage on their life and identity and can better give a warning can bring the better change and ask them to focus rather on much more important things which benefit the society and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, i mean, i think, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2504.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64564007421 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67012172294 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486085343228 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 808.2 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 107.0 23.0359550562 464% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 272.339053388 60.3974514979 451% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 500.8 118.986275619 421% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 107.8 23.4991977007 459% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 5.21951772744 402% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 7.80617977528 461% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120546457014 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066660047924 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386980808149 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066660047924 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386980808149 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.4 14.1392134831 385% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -28.67 48.8420337079 -59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.8 12.1743820225 360% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.84 8.38706741573 141% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.8 11.2143820225 399% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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