all around the world, people watch foreign films much more than locally produced films. why? should the government provide financial support to the local film industry.
In the prevailing days, the preference of the domestically produced movies is decreasing day by day. This essay will discuss the reasons of watching foreign movies and why government should not provide funds to local film industry.
Several reasons can be stated behind the increasing popularity of foreign films. Having more curiosity to learn about the other cultures is the first reason. Because when people watch any foreign movie, they learn about their culture and tradition. Moreover they also get to know about food and clothes which eat and wear in the movies ; however in local movies, they see their own culture, with which they are already familiar. Apart from this, the budget of foreign movies is higher than local movies because these films are released worldwide. So the quality of foreign films is better and equipment which are used in these movies are also very expensive. Along with this, those films are made in the supervision of professionals and they represent their films in a good way; thus, the people are giving more preference to the foreign films.
However, the authorities need not to spend money to promote domestic film industry because there are also many other sectors which are under developed, such as education, infrastructure, transportation, unemployment, poverty and health. should the government allocate money to improve these sectors, it would be fruitful for the betterment of any country. Moreover, it is not the obligation of the government to provide financial support for the local films because there are many private companies which are already promoting this industry.
To conclude, the foreign film ignites curiosity and they have better quality, that is why people watch more foreign films. Even though the popularity of the domestic movies is decreasing, the government should not reserve money for promoting local film industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, thus, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28903654485 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63054827365 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0931009701 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381416715755 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13885882631 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102994315591 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262371791338 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564626599288 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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