Today we have a lot of technologies helping us to write words or sentences instead of us, so is it necessary to learn handwriting skills? Some people think that learning the skill of handwriting is useless and wastes time, while others see the importance of this skill. In my opinion, I think that children should learn how to write for two reasons: memorization and culture.
Handwriting can help to memorize vocabulary. Many people usually face a problem with memorization when they learn a new thing like vocabulary. They can remember those new vocabs at first; however, in a few days, they will forget every word due to not using them. These problems can be solved by the handwriting skill in that when writing those words, we have to spell the words in our mind. It means that we have to review the words at least two times. The first time is when we read the words, and the second one is when we practice writing. Therefore, we have an opportunity to recap everything more through writing.
Another reason is that it is one of the ways to keep our cultures for the next generation. The correct method of writing a word, which is innovated by our ancestors, will be forgotten since everyone uses only convenient ways to write a word such as typing in a computer, texting a message, and so on. We, thus, will forget how to write in the appropriate method although we still remember those words. For example, if we do not bike a bicycle for a long time, we will not bike it as good as we practiced at the first time. This will happen with the skill of handwriting provided that we ignore to learn how to write.
In conclusion, the handwriting skill is still necessary for our society and descendant. Not only does the skill help us improve memorization, but it also preserves our cultures for children in the future. If we do not teach this important skill to children, we might lose more than the skill.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to handwrite'.
Suggestion: to handwrite
...tead of us, so is it necessary to learn handwriting skills? Some people think that learning...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5889212828 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60340222937 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498542274052 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5289733412 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141010350984 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566728201101 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561762676127 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114397910574 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700997660195 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to handwrite'.
Suggestion: to handwrite
...tead of us, so is it necessary to learn handwriting skills? Some people think that learning...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5889212828 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60340222937 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498542274052 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5289733412 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141010350984 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566728201101 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561762676127 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114397910574 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700997660195 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.