Through the history the appearance of the Internet has played a significant role in mankind's life. What obvious is that the internet like many other new inventions can have positive and negative effects. Some people believe that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information, in contrast, others think that access to much information creates problems. From my own perspective, I highly support the first idea and in the next paragraphs will delve into the main reasons.
One of the most important reasons is that by accessing the internet, people will be aware of what is happening around them. When people surfing on the internet, they are able to find out about all the news all around the world by clicking some simple links. A study which has been done 3 years ago showed that people who used the internet, are more aware of the world conditions even in far countries.
The other reason which deserves some words here is that the internet nowadays has become a profitable tool which helps us to get information about even our initial needs. In the past when people wanted to start a new sport or any other task, they had to go to a specialist and pay a lot of money and finally hear their advice only for one time. But right now they are able to search the needed information on the internet which are most of the time free and read them hundred of times.
Although all the aforementioned reasons are those which may one finds out at first glance, still, there is one reason. Information on the internet can be used in emergency situations. Sometimes an unexpected thing happens in houses or companies and they can not wait for the coming help. The most effective way is to search for a primary solution on the internet.
To make a long story short, if one merit the advantages and disadvantages of the internet, soon will understand that using this invention can help people to improve their life. Considering this note is necessary that although the internet gives us a lot of information, sometimes maybe they are not true. So it's better to act carefully and also speak to others before making big decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...world conditions even in far countries. The other reason which deserves some wor...
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...are most of the time free and read them hundred of times. Although all the aforemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, still, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73796791444 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55487964329 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55614973262 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2650049396 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.235294118 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288696845964 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906168867318 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103353043806 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157878944835 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714773146985 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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