The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 an the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
The charts give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 as well as their marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
As it shown the first graph, number of marriages and divorces in the USA overall downward trend between 1970 and 2000. The rates of marriages in 1970 stood at 2.5 millions then the rates moderately in ten years later. Over ten years in 1990, the rates went down by 0.25 millions to 2.25 millions. The number of divorces in the USA at 1 millions then there were rose steadily to just below 1.5 millions in 1980. After that, there were fell...
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Sentence: As it shown the first graph, number of marriages and divorces in the USA overall downward trend between 1970 and 2000.
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number of marriages and divorces in the USA overall downward trend between 1970 and 2000.
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Sentence: The number of divorces in the USA at 1 millions then there were rose steadily to just below 1.5 millions in 1980.
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the rates decreased of adult who were never married or divorced and widowed in thirty-years.
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No. of Words: 254 200
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 254 200
No. of Characters: 1181 1000
No. of Different Words: 111 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.992 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.65 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.432 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 73 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.964 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.44 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.674 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.204 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4