Sports have been exponentially becoming popular in many demographics of the society.
While there are many factors which influences the success in games, the most essential is the energy required either physical or mental.
Some people think that physical ability is important for this success while few others consider mental strength plays more vital role.
This essay will discuss both point of views. As well as offering my personal opinion that blend of both energies physical and mental are required for the success in sports.
On one hand, some people are of the view that physical involvement is the main criteria in victory. As this could be the reason why people strengthen their outer body to increase stamina for participating in activities related to sports.While warm ups ,exercises and Gym adds to body building, maintaining good health and diet raises athlethe's physical strength. For example, a lean and weak body will easily give up while running in a sport activity and feel lethargic.Hence, to catch up with the speed and pace of the competitor, the participant will require a healthy movement to reach its goal.
On the other hand, few other people give more importance to mental stability. Though mental awareness and cognitive skills are utmost important to take decisions while playing any kind of sports. In order to understand the concept and techniques of the game to be played, a stable mindset is essential. For instance,while playing dodge ball, when the ball is thrown by the competitor, it is well understood by the player,which direction should he dodge. Also this helps the player to use his skills to concentrate and rely on his decision. As a result, the player is able to read the opposite player's mind and try to win.
In conclusion, to gain the achievement both external body strength as well as internal mind energy are the two main factors and plays an imperitive role.This essay discussed the importance of winning in sports can be obtained by both, fitness of physical energy as well as mental strength and thinking skills. In my opinion, a blend of these two strengths will involve in greater strength to be a winner in sports.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... point of views. As well as offering my personal opinion that blend of both energies physical an...
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...ies physical and mental are required for the success in sports. On one hand, s...
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... success in sports. On one hand, some people are of the view that physical inv...
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Suggestion: While
...ipating in activities related to sports.While warm ups ,exercises and Gym adds to bod...
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...ivities related to sports.While warm ups ,exercises and Gym adds to body building,...
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Suggestion: Hence
... in a sport activity and feel lethargic.Hence, to catch up with the speed and pace of...
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...table mindset is essential. For instance,while playing dodge ball, when the ball is th...
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...the ball is thrown by the competitor, it is well understood by the player,which d...
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...or, it is well understood by the player,which direction should he dodge. Also this he...
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Suggestion: Also,
...player,which direction should he dodge. Also this helps the player to use his skill...
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...dodge. Also this helps the player to use his skills to concentrate and rely on hi...
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Line 10, column 68, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...achievement both external body strength as well as internal mind energy are the two main f...
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...ssay discussed the importance of winning in sports can be obtained by both, fitn...
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... importance of winning in sports can be obtained by both, fitness of physical en...
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...ined by both, fitness of physical energy as well as mental strength and thinking ...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ed by both, fitness of physical energy as well as mental strength and thinking skills. I...
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... as well as mental strength and thinking skills. In my opinion, a blend of these ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01652892562 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75321165116 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542699724518 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1660689866 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277113559049 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879028954002 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823431678383 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131226827544 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634956773119 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... point of views. As well as offering my personal opinion that blend of both energies physical an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies physical and mental are required for the success in sports. On one hand, s...
^^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... success in sports. On one hand, some people are of the view that physical inv...
^^
Line 6, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...ipating in activities related to sports.While warm ups ,exercises and Gym adds to bod...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ivities related to sports.While warm ups ,exercises and Gym adds to body building,...
^^
Line 6, column 472, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
... in a sport activity and feel lethargic.Hence, to catch up with the speed and pace of...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 316, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...table mindset is essential. For instance,while playing dodge ball, when the ball is th...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the ball is thrown by the competitor, it is well understood by the player,which d...
^^
Line 8, column 422, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...or, it is well understood by the player,which direction should he dodge. Also this he...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 456, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...player,which direction should he dodge. Also this helps the player to use his skill...
^^^^
Line 8, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dodge. Also this helps the player to use his skills to concentrate and rely on hi...
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Line 10, column 68, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...achievement both external body strength as well as internal mind energy are the two main f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...in factors and plays an imperitive role.This essay discussed the importance of winni...
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Line 10, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssay discussed the importance of winning in sports can be obtained by both, fitn...
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Line 10, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... importance of winning in sports can be obtained by both, fitness of physical en...
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Line 10, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ined by both, fitness of physical energy as well as mental strength and thinking ...
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Line 10, column 266, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ed by both, fitness of physical energy as well as mental strength and thinking skills. I...
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Line 10, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as well as mental strength and thinking skills. In my opinion, a blend of these ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01652892562 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75321165116 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542699724518 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1660689866 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277113559049 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879028954002 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823431678383 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131226827544 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634956773119 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.