In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Children's behaviour need to controlled in many ways, either being lenient or setting up strict rules.
Some people believe that corporal punishments is the best way to instill discipline in children while others think that children needs to be given freedom of doing whatever they want to do.This essay will argue that teaching children etiquettes and manners is utmost necessary while being given their freedom of choice to certain extent.
Every parents are always concerned and wary about their children's behaviour.They are justifiably worried for their children's better upbringing in the society and to become a better citizen of the country.As a result, parents tend to have control and overpower which they believe is natural form of protection to their younger ones.Indeed, there have been instances of children unfortunately going astray and falling into wrong company of friends.These few instances have bolstered existing fears in parents.So they opt to teach and check by setting strict boundary levels.In addition,parents have gone to the limit of corporal punishments and smacking ,believing it o be the best way to discipline.
However, the fact of harsh rule must have worked to certain extent ,the freedom of choice to certain extent could fill the gap in upbringing of children.
Most people believe that leniency can help improve the cognitive skills, thinking abilities and mental health.Moreover,it can help in decision-making and overcome fear and gain confidence.For instance, survey reveals that while given freedom of choice along with disciplinary rules followed makes the child take right decision.Apparently,this could lead the child behave in appropriate manner.
To recapitulate,a balance between setting up rules and maintaining leniency can help develop a well-behaved child in a society and responsible citizen of the country.
Therefore, in my opinion, a proper framework is imperative in disciplining children's behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65540540541 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23082504327 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.584726543 49.4020404114 410% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.142857143 106.682146367 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.2857142857 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5714285714 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306170172734 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127834836043 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689382441116 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127834836043 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689382441116 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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