Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
No one can deny the massive importance of education and its impact on the commnuity. Thus, it can be claimed that government ought to spent more of the budget on science rather than other fields. I agree with that for two reasons and those will be further explained in the following essay.
First of all, science has the ability to fight diseases. In other words, scientists and scholars are dedicated to find cureness of many illness and that determination will not occurred unless the government provide all the supplies and facilities for that. For instance, it was published in Science magazine that around one billion dollar is spent every year on scientific reasearch in Duke university and that huge amount of money is more than the whole budget which is allocated for the education in Egypt. Consequently, it can be seen that the more money is specified for education and science, the more advanced and ranked the country or the university will be.
Secondly, if a deep glance has taken at the other problems which are claimed to deserve more money than the education, it can be found that those problems will be solved easily if the government invest more in science. To illustrate more, scientists are the main pillars to solve any problem because they understand the importance of science and with its help you can overcome any dilemma. For example, in Swedan, there was a huge problem regarding the traffic and the rate of car accidents were rised every single day until government decided to explained this problem to the scientists and the problem solved with a very simply way which is to remove the traffic lights to increase the citizen’s caution. The results were published in Time magazine and was epic because of the simplicity of the solution.
In conclusion, it can be seen that as long as the government invest more in education and science, more problems and dilemmas can be solved. I do agree that government should take this into consideration because of its influence on the future’s generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many illnesses
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Suggestion: occur
...illness and that determination will not occurred unless the government provide all the s...
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... the university will be. Secondly, if a deep glance has taken at the other pro...
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...influence on the future’s generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93313953488 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66686084536 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485465116279 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0489642843 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.538461538 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265101547438 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969921170905 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592560163299 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175831256027 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278528303726 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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