The use of social media is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Using social media as a substitue face-to-face interaction is causing public controversy.While I accept that this trend has some nagetive impacts, I believe that it is more likely to be benifcaily
On the one hand, social media has several impacts on society. Firsly, the frequent use of social media can lead people to avoid talking each other beacause they spend most their time on Facbok. In other words, they seem to have no time to take part in social activities, this result in isolating people and discourage real interaction. In addition to this, the communication ability is gradually losing, resulting from using shorthand and shortened version while online. For example, some words like Swag, LOL,LOLZ have become a trend toward youngsters, these words can not be understand sometime if a person is not as much active on social media
On the other hand, there are several advantages on social media use. As we can see that the outbreak of Covid-19 epidemic in recent days has prevented students to attend courses at school, thanks to socia media such as Skype gives students a chance to online study with their teaches. In terms of business, social media helps business people to easily create a online metting, which allows all members in part of the world to participate in a conference without need to travel. This contributes to save a large of money and time spent on long trip
In concusion, it seem to me that the befenits of physical interaction alternative by using socia media are more significant than the possible drawbacks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...teraction is causing public controversy.While I accept that this trend has some naget...
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...acbok. In other words, they seem to have no time to take part in social activitie...
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...on is not as much active on social media On the other hand, there are several adv...
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...19 epidemic in recent days has prevented students to attend courses at school, th...
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...ool, thanks to socia media such as Skype gives students a chance to online study ...
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...me spent on long trip In concusion, it seem to me that the befenits of physical int...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01538461538 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72242495455 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0988565353 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249045822644 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103147839348 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684731869376 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151105994105 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707116762704 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.