The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The table above illustrate the 8 detected birds species. they were observered in two sessions: winter and summer. each of the listed birds species were observed in Woodchuck County.
Over all, most birds appeared in summer time.the less amount spotted in winter, while three of the birds typs observed in both winter and summer. that means they are not a migrent birds. Summer in Woodchuch is the favorate period of time to spend for the eight species. birds seems to like Woodchuck's summer indeed, as the table showes.
Clearly, summer time scored the most viewed bird species.Bluebirds, Mockingbirds, Orioles and woodeckers all showed up in this session.Woodchuck County would be an exibition of birds.
Meanwhile, winter time observed relatively only one type called Juncos.Juncos prefer to spend summer somewhere else. however, Woodpeckers, Crows and Cardinals have been seen in both times of the year. they must be a Woodchunck based birds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
...llustrate the 8 detected birds species. they were observered in two sessions: winter...
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Suggestion: Each
...red in two sessions: winter and summer. each of the listed birds species were observ...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ty. Over all, most birds appeared in summer time.the less amount spotted in winter, whil...
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Suggestion: That
...yps observed in both winter and summer. that means they are not a migrent birds. Sum...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ds. Summer in Woodchuch is the favorate period of time to spend for the eight species. birds s...
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Suggestion: Birds
...of time to spend for the eight species. birds seems to like Woodchucks summer indeed,...
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Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ndeed, as the table showes. Clearly, summer time scored the most viewed bird species.Blu...
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Suggestion: Bluebirds
...ime scored the most viewed bird species.Bluebirds, Mockingbirds, Orioles and woodeckers a...
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Suggestion: Woodchuck
...oodeckers all showed up in this session.Woodchuck County would be an exibition of birds. ...
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Suggestion: Juncos
... relatively only one type called Juncos.Juncos prefer to spend summer somewhere else. ...
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Suggestion: However
... prefer to spend summer somewhere else. however, Woodpeckers, Crows and Cardinals have ...
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Line 8, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ve been seen in both times of the year. they must be a Woodchunck based birds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35099337748 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88858655464 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662251655629 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4617719362 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4545454545 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141954598726 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562164169268 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425177647853 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943192157923 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194366092057 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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