As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will detreriorate
The issue staement that as the people will depend more on the technology, it will have a detoriorative effect on their mental ability to think about themselves. However, i completely agree with this view point. The reason for my opinion on this view are excessive dependecy on digital resources even for minute calculations, spending more time on computer and other tech will reduce mental and yogic health, and will also force people to become lethargic. The examples that will be used to corroborate this opinions are using calculator for simple addition and multiplication operation, decreased mental health and physical health.
Firstly, I completely agree with this opinion because when people will be using digital mechines for each and every work so, it will increase thier dependency on the mechines and other technologies. For instance making chapati in kitchen with help of machine, doing some easy calculations with the help of calculator. Hence this example corroborates that more using of technology will reduce the mental capability of people.
Secondly, much using of technology will drastically rduce the yogic heath and well being of the people. For example it was obseverved that there was more healthy and happy people in village who are less aware of technology and its applicataion than those who were exploiting technology at a vigrous rate. Hence its more use make peoples mental and yogic health weaker.
Thirdly, using technology to its maximal extent for every work wil have negetive effects on human health. As it was observed in a survey that people who were using machines and technology to perform the operation which can easyly be done mannualy were found more prone to the diseases like joint pain, arthritis etc. compared to the other people.
In the end, I restate that because of excessive dependency for minute calculations, exploiting technology for even simple and easy manual work and due to cosmopolitan technology spending less time with yourself. The examples were used above to supports this opinion. Hence more reliance on technology will have a negative effect on the ability to think about themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24855491329 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71190686392 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485549132948 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5145200986 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307533077561 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111958512158 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840471833993 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195935386905 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346624028438 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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