Television has dominated of leisure time vastly. This make people lazy and reduce their socializing.
Do you agree or disagree ?
Firstly,while watching television,one cannot control the fascination from indulging more into it due to display of contents with remarkable audio visual effects.This eventually lead to reduced productivity and increased fatigue as one cannot spend their same time in physical activities such as gyming,running,playing outdoor sports etc ,thereby degrading their health in long run.
Secondly,as a significant portion of their time is wasted watching television,they are unable to fullfill expectations from their families,friends,collegues,etc due to lack of socializing and networking in their lives.
Inspite of the above assertion, i believe in exploring the other side of the coin where television have affected people's lives positively.
Apart from entertainment,there is vast majority of useful content available to explore on televisions.
For example,there are channels such as discovery,ABVP News,Star sports etc, that not only increase in knowledge of a person but also broadens his mind in understanding deeply about currents affairs.
Moreover,it is widely acknowledged that,in order to stay fit mentally,television has acted as a source of entertainment to escape from the boredom of people's stringent routines.
To conclude,although there are multiple reasons to curse the television claiming it to be an idiot box that has negatively affected lives of individuals,but the benefits derived from the latter cannot be ignored as they far outweight its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96713615023 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.07357016127 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699530516432 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.4466712265 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.571428571 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5714285714 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139043151595 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575687038356 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398572613917 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575687038356 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398572613917 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.94 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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