In some areas of the US, a «curfew» is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
The United States government sometimes impose a curfew in their numerous cities , to keep an eye on illegal activities such as smuggling of drugs,transfer of cash,terror planning,unauthorized immigration etc,as a measure to enhance national security. During this phase,certain strict guidelines are issued by the concerned authorities like curbing free movement of teenagers at night. I completely accord with the above statement as it is a necessary step of government to keep their basic motive of social security unhindered.
To embark on,there are several reasons as to why individuals are guided to accompany their wards at night time.
Firstly,as teenagers not sensible enough to judge the cons of curfews due to their lack of expertise in dealing with havoc situation,the authorities follow their duty of reminding guardians about their duty as a citizen of the country irrespective of what they think at an individual level. Moreover,as darks hours are usually prefered by certain segments of society to indulge in illegal activities,free movement of teenagers at night add to the extra effort of police to identify who is guilty and who is innocent.
Secondly,as teenagers can be easily manipulated and used as a medium for unauthorized tasks by goons,a parent can accompany them so that their child remain guarded from any such encounters.
Additionally,adults have better identity proofs than children due to their identity documents linked to their addresses,financial assets,relatives etc, so they might serve as a witness to their wards.
To conclude,it is the prime responsiblity of both the parents and government to prevent youngsters from all the hassles during a curfew,therefore both the parties must fullfill and understand their their roles with utmost responsiblity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98888888889 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.75101386363 2.80592935109 169% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640740740741 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 135.0 20.2975951904 665% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 808.5 106.682146367 758% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 135.0 20.7667163134 650% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.5 7.06120827912 545% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137075560624 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112403327828 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037448066634 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793934047869 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512061413008 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 74.3 13.0946893788 567% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -82.47 50.2224549098 -164% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 58.3 11.3001002004 516% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.65 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.54 8.58950901804 181% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 66.0 9.78957915832 674% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 56.0 10.1190380762 553% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.