The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Instilling the sense of both cooperation and competition in preparing young people for the role of leadership in government, industry, or other field is a good notion. I will partly agree with both. To be a leader is to be able to handle and control lots of responsibilities. A leader is one who is selfless, hardworking, confident and a talented individual. A leader must be able to show by examples and not a jingolist.
Cooperation is an act of working as a team, seeing abilities in one another. Instilling and teaching young people about cooperation goes a very long way in raising a God fearing leader. once a leader already has the sense of cooperation, that individual can work as a team without being bias either in judgement or in assignment of duties. All other associates will be able to freely work with such leader to the development and growth of such society. Unlike a leader who lacks the sense and character of cooperation, such leader would find it very difficult to work with and as a team, such leader will rule as a monarch and won't consider other peoples opinion. This can result in hatred and even lead to the fall of such society. The society can never improve and if there is any development it will be so minute and difficult to achieve. A society who is led by a leader who sees cooperation as a theme will not require so much investment in security as every individual in that society is a watchman. There won't be fear of insecurity.
On the other hand, competition has its positive side. where there is competition, there is massive improvement and development as one team will want to be seen as working and relentless team, that type of a leader will work effortlessly to acheive what other leaders in the past cannot achieve during their tenure. A very good example is our electoral head of states. To attain a position as a leader would definitely comes with some sacrifice and endurance. As each leader is voted in, such leader will want to do every possible work to achieve a success and bring glory to their supporter during ther stipulated ruling period. A there is a saying that one good turn deserves another. when ther is competition, each leader will work hard to achieve a success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Once
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fficult to achieve. A society who is led by a leader who sees cooperation as a th...
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Suggestion: Where
...and, competition has its positive side. where there is competition, there is massive ...
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Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
...en as working and relentless team, that type of a leader will work effortlessly to acheiv...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...a position as a leader would definitely comes with some sacrifice and endurance. As e...
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Suggestion: When
...ng that one good turn deserves another. when ther is competition, each leader will w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65736040609 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81066704926 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469543147208 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.4337604572 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.380952381 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.52380952381 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150327549288 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520730052074 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106823015761 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121844380776 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746106195401 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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