Some people feel that entertainer (e.g film start, pop musicians or sports start) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?
In this 21st century, people want better tipe of jobs, which provide high salary. Some individuals think that entertainerss: Bollywood celeps, pop musicians- sing with dance; sports men are paid too much money. I disagree with this statement.
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- Due to the coronavirus all schools have been closed making both students and teachers use electronic devices to study online What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend Write an essay of at least 250 words to support your arguments 56
- Some people feel that entertainer e g film start pop musicians or sports start are paid too much money Do you agree or disagree Which other types of job should be highly paid 56
- The government investment in Arts music and theatre is waste of money governments should invest this fund in public services instead To what extent do you agree with this statement 67
- Some people think that Zoos are cruel and should be closed however some people think that Zoos are useful for protecting rare animals Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- It is important for children to lear the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree with this opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 41.998997996 10% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37656903766 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70254670407 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.769874476987 0.561755894193 137% => OK
syllable_count: 97.2 506.74238477 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 0.4 1.60771543086 25% => Avg_syllables_per_word is low.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 82.5270992899 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.1111111111 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2777777778 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 7.06120827912 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 3.4128256513 615% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0786278861098 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170396128059 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544675132854 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124186637085 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124186637085 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 159.8 50.2224549098 318% => Flesch_reading_ease is high.
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: -5.8 11.3001002004 -51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.67 8.58950901804 66% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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