many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and Society.
To what extent do you agree?
In this 21st century, people are used to with technical gizmos : mobile, computer, and many more, due to that the use of social networking sites are booming by leaps and bounds. Some mankinds reckon that thesee kind of sites have had negative impact upon individuals and society as well. I partially agree with this given statement.
On one hand, there are humongous number of social sites and applications : Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and many more, where humans can meet new people ; make new friends through social sites, which are very Benignant for the individuals and business tycoons in many ways : for advertising, marketing, providing some important informations to citizens and so on. It is beneficial for country and author. For an instance during one of the pandemics - coronavirus, the Indian government has published one application or site - The Arogya Setu application, which informs the public, is there any affected person nearby them and provide some preventive steps to stay safe from the virus.
On the other hand, there are some negative impact of social networking sites and some people are doing misuse of this kind of social sides : to hack social account of someone, scams, stole personal information. Some celebrities use that to do hostility with others. For an example one of the well-known and mostly used site - Twitter, where business mans, actors, politicians are doing bad twits and try to do histinity with opposite party, which makes worst situation in nation.
In conclusion, social networking sites have positive use : to develop business, while, negative is for doing some type of scams and e-crimes with individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from the virus. On the other hand, there are some negative impact of social...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'makes the worst'.
Suggestion: makes the worst
...do histinity with opposite party, which makes worst situation in nation. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2679245283 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70945522883 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.064385418 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.6 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273244831342 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110791653984 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846330640682 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182767464324 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575481871555 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.