Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Books and newspapers has always been contributed to the important skills and information to human beings, it can improved the ability of thinking. While, some people believe that watching television can also be educational nowadays. In my opinion, whether a person read books or watch television in order to improve skills is all up to him, and no one should tell him that any particular activity is better.
Firstly, parents sharp their children at the very beginning of their children's live. they teach them value and share their interest with them. The first thing children learn is how to read at schools. For instance, they learn how to communicate with each other and start imaganing things. For instance, they can be the leader of tomorrow, one famous person said, "every leader in the Reader". Secondly, every school, college and universities follow the old-fashioned value, teaching students from books, so students can learn new important things from books, and that can help them to achieve anything in live. Imagination is one of them. By studying various number of books and technic, they can easily develop the ability to invent new things. Finally, reading habit is very useful skills, it can save you from danger situations some time. For example, there are many survival books, which can save people lives in situation like to survive in a forest.
In my opinion, both books and television are essential to the world. television also play a major role in people lives. For example, channel live discover or national geography are always play a indispensible role in people lives. For instance, from space exploration to ancient aliens, sea to forest, these channel covers all the information of our planet or even outer space.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
...and information to human beings, it can improved the ability of thinking. While, some pe...
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t can improved the ability of thinking. While, some people believe that watching tele...
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Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be educational nowadays. In my opinion, whether a person read books or watch tel...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...very beginning of their childrens live. they teach them value and share their intere...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Television
... television are essential to the world. television also play a major role in people lives....
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...scover or national geography are always play a indispensible role in people lives. F...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r or national geography are always play a indispensible role in people lives. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11805555556 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63127556731 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7595631652 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7058823529 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16979998762 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056564477062 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510470836143 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117665849789 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519199337961 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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