The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the percentage of senior citizens whose ages 65 years and over living in USA, Japan and Sweden in 100 years since 1940.
Overall, while the proportion of the elder inhabitants in USA and Sweden shows similar slight increase, this category in Japan is predicted to have the most significant change throughout the period.
Look at the graph in details, from 1940 to 2020, starting at 7% and 9% respectively, the percentage of adults aged 65 and up of Sweden and USA rose slightly in the next 50 years before sharing the same percentage at 14% in late 90s. After that, from 1999 to 2020, there was a slight increase from the meeting spot to 20% before falling back to about 18% at 2020 in proportion of elderly population in Sweden; while this category in USA showed unchanged. Interestingly, the figure for Japan remained stable around 5%.
In the future, while the rate of the elder population of the USA is calculated to reach more than 20% in 2040, this number in Sweden is predicted a remarkable climb from under 20% to 25% in 2040. There is thought to be a rocket in the percentage of elderly people in Japan from around 7% to about 27% which will be held the highest rank of 3 countries.
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- Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home leisure and work activities To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages 84
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 61
- Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58904109589 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56259190166 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543378995434 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6355806364 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120319031261 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546227901628 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416672799774 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728581546021 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325296252196 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.