Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some that the most essential thing about being wealthy is the chance for helping others by creating opportunity. In my opinion, I totally concur with this notion due to some reasons below.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why the rich has opened theirs own charity and has donated a great amount of money to other charities. First and foremost, a huge number of wealthy people often donate their money in order to help underprivileged ones and the community, this means the rich create a opportunity for poor students and learners from remote areas to go to school then in the future, they can contribute to the community and the country. Take Bill Gates as a prime example, not only giving his’s money to the charity but also giving donations to children from remote areas, many disable people who is not able to work by their own. Furthermore, because of many donations have been given so many charity companies has to opened, this means the rich also create jobs for many other people.
On the other hand, not only caring about society at the moment but the wealthy people also notice about next generation. For instance, Vietnamese VinFast company replace all the traditional buses for electric buses in many cities here. This leads to reducing the polluted air and our children is going to live in a fresher earth. In addition, the leaders from this company also trying to emphasize the importance of using renewable energies by producing many electric bikes then selling them with no profits.
In conclusion, helping other is one of the key to improve the lifestyle for the community, this also means the world have been maintained substantially and dynamically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: his
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87586206897 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5252682602 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1894497469 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194189732317 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757850799297 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737688687326 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118043645812 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057005621956 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.