The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph compares three nations in terms of the ratio of the community over the age of 65 from 1940 to 2040.
What stands out from the graph is that there were two trends that reached higher than the other in the first 80 years. However, between 2020 and 2040 Japan's population will surpass the other two countries and reach a peak.
Starting at a quite high point, the rate of population of USA and Sweden growth markedly to around 15% in 1980. In the next 40 years, the number of people in USA reduced slightly to 14%. Besides, in Sweden fluctuated and reach about 18% at 2020. Over the period of prediction, these figures will bounce to 23% and 26% respectively in the two nations of the USA and Sweden in the last 20 years.
Looking at the beginning of the lowest line in the chart, it can be seen that the proportion of citizens over 65 years old in Japan went down to 3% within the first 20 years before remaining stable between 1980 and 2000. With the projection, this number will rocket rapidly up to more than 25% in the final year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3654822335 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17728038444 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58883248731 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.40164606 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149078341387 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581220360985 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732567344946 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1045384252 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076679959414 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.