News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in
newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do you
think that there is too much emphasis on bad news these days?
Editors have been the most important people in the media in terms of the content. In order to be published, there are a lot of factors to have an influence on it. Nowadays, the positive news is being streamed and printed as much as the negative one.
News on TV and the articles in the newspapers have been depending on the world-wide crucial occasions. Everyday something happens on the planet which people must be informed or warned. Environmental issues, political interaction of leading counties, medical advancements are valuable topics that people need to be highlighted. The American Bureau of Statistics revealed the information that the news about murders of prominent political persons become the hottest for less than 24 hours. The tragically loss of Princess Diana was broadcasted from North America to Australia and issued in the most number of magazines and newspapers. In other words, it is necessary to inform people about global warming or new development to fight breast cancer.
Unfortunately, the bad news has always been up to because human existence is unpredictable everything can happen. It is possible for broadcasting companies and newspapers, even those which producing entertainment content to make a pause and remind the greatness of John Kennedy. Life has a negative part and media is a provider because you cannot stay blind forever. It is unnatural to dodge negative parts of news because being a part of society it is necessary to be fully informed. This is why people should not afraid of bad news and this is not a point of mass media to damage you somehow.
In conclusion, news editors will always be the primary people responsible for a huge flow of information that we are consuming.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-03-12 | exclight | 84 | view |
| 2020-02-29 | Nikita Gamaiunov | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...and the articles in the newspapers have been depending on the world-wide crucial occasions. Ev...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'newses'.
Suggestion: newses
... is why people should not afraid of bad news and this is not a point of mass media t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05244755245 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90825238386 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.618351387 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131997013128 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452271469083 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353286735105 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832481607579 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277347245104 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.