You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter:
• explain what you need
• say when you plan to be there
• ask for information about prices
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms
Dear Mr/MS,
I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to you to inform you that I will be in Singapore next month; I will appreciate if you can help me to find a rental apartment.
Firstly, I would like to tell you about my requirements. I need a Double room, and I prefer it on the third floor with a view of the garden. Moreover, it should have its bathroom and kitchen.
Let me add this I will be there on 7th July, and I am going to stay in Singapore for 8 days.
One final issue that I would like to discuss with you is the cost. I need its cost per night 200 dollars or less.
I look forward to hearing from you. your prompt response is highly appreciated. Should you require any further information, you will contact me. You can contact me Via WhatsApp; here is the contact number: 55664475. Thanks in advance.
Faithfully,
Ahmed Karem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr/MS, I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your f...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...ext month; I will appreciate if you can help me to find a rental apartment. Firstly, I wou...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can help me to find a rental apartment. Firstly, I would like to tell you about ...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t should have its bathroom and kitchen. Let me add this I will be there on 7th J...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u is the cost. I need its cost per night 200 dollars or less. I look forward...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun dollars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...need its cost per night 200 dollars or less. I look forward to hearing from yo...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s cost per night 200 dollars or less. I look forward to hearing from you. your...
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Line 11, column 37, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
... I look forward to hearing from you. your prompt response is highly appreciated. ...
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Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...664475. Thanks in advance. Faithfully, Ahmed Karem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34131736527 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49939574612 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3456703339 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.7857142857 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9285714286 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326497430829 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095844101319 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101043761571 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164066433404 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809853608817 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 94.15 70.7449484536 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.9 7.45979381443 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.