You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter:
explain what you need
say when you plan to be there
ask for information about prices
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I am writing to you to express my interest for renting a holiday apartment. Although my visit to Singapore has been planned at next weekend and it is too soon, I hope that you will be able to help me with accommodation on these days. Moreover, all of facilities which I need are a clean apartment with one bed and hot water in the bathroom. Despite of my little requirements, I am looking forward to my holiday and comfortable accommodation.
I have already made list of activities which I want to do, yet I will be thankful to you for recommendations about unforgettable local sightseeing. First of all, I am landing at the airport on the Friday’s afternoon. Undoubtedly, the greatest buildings in the city center are going to be visited primarily. In this situation, an apartment situated close to the up and coming area will be preferable. Secondly, I desire to visit one of the national parks on Saturday, but I am going to return to the apartment about midnight, so it will not be restricted by time. In the end, I guarantee to leave the accommodation to the Sunday’s midday, because I have just bought a return ticket.
In conclusion, I would like you to answer me total price for my requirements. I have been waiting for visiting your city for ages, yet my plans and mood will be based on cost and comfort of accommodation. If you were able to mail the final price in two or three days, it would give me a relief about future trip. Otherwise, I will have to find even the roof above my head in Singapore.
I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55017301038 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93892851199 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4516822837 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265810656063 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790259698539 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769643671661 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168185869498 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304535703082 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.