You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter:
• explain what you need
• say when you plan to be there
• ask for information about prices
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms
Dear Mr/MS,
I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to you to inform you that I will be in Singapore next month; I will be appreciated if you can help me to find a rental apartment.
Firstly, I would like to tell you about my requirements. I need a Double room, and I prefer to be on the third floor with a view on the garden; moreover, it has its bathroom and kitchen.
Let me add this I will be there on 7th July, and I am going to stay in Singapore for 8 days.
One final issue that I would like to discuss with you is the cost, I need the cost per night for this room 200 dollars or less.
I look forward to hearing from you; your prompt response is highly appreciated. Should you require any further information, you will contact me. You can contact me Via WhatsApp; here is the contact number: 55664475. Thanks in advance.
Faithfully,
Ahmed Karem
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr/MS, I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your f...
^^^
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...month; I will be appreciated if you can help me to find a rental apartment. Firstly, I wou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can help me to find a rental apartment. Firstly, I would like to tell you about ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eover, it has its bathroom and kitchen. Let me add this I will be there on 7th J...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 123, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun dollars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... per night for this room 200 dollars or less. I look forward to hearing from yo...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ght for this room 200 dollars or less. I look forward to hearing from you; your...
^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...664475. Thanks in advance. Faithfully, Ahmed Karem
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28070175439 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49517848387 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7230044596 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5454545455 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337851780804 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115500441528 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102983204837 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172555071724 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788351513935 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr/MS, I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your f...
^^^
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...month; I will be appreciated if you can help me to find a rental apartment. Firstly, I wou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can help me to find a rental apartment. Firstly, I would like to tell you about ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eover, it has its bathroom and kitchen. Let me add this I will be there on 7th J...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 123, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun dollars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... per night for this room 200 dollars or less. I look forward to hearing from yo...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ght for this room 200 dollars or less. I look forward to hearing from you; your...
^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...664475. Thanks in advance. Faithfully, Ahmed Karem
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28070175439 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49517848387 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7230044596 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5454545455 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337851780804 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115500441528 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102983204837 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172555071724 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788351513935 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.