Some people prefer to live in small family units, while others think it is better to live in large family groups. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.
There are split opinions about the types of family that people live in. Some believes that living in a nuclear family is more beneficial, whereas another group of thinkers support the idea of living in an extended family. However, both has its own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the opinion would be discussed.
Examining the former opinion, the primary arguments the supporters would put forward is they can gain many advantages from living with a few members of a family. This is because nowadays, the cost of living increases every day if people live together with many members in the same house, it may be hard for them to support their family's life and take them a huge expenditure to pay for electronic or water bills. In addition, they also believe that their children can be given better education opportunities. The reason is children are closer to their parents, and they have more time to discuss with parents about their problems. For example, children can receive advises from parent to choose an appropriate school when they confused, hence their performance at school will be better.
On the contrary, the latter view suggest that it is better to live in the multi-generation family. Firstly, young parents do not have to worry about taking care of their children when working because their kids can be looked after by their grandparent and played with their relatives safely at home. This does not only strengthen the family bond but also prevent adolescents from technology devices. Apart from this, the youngster can learn important life lessons and valuable life experiment from older to practice in real life. Moreover, aged people can pass the tradition and customs from generation to generation, which help the young understand more clear about their ancestor live.
In conclusion, while living with many members of a family is beneficial to some extent, I believe that living in nuclear families has greater advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09202453988 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58891344132 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4934300016 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244156644106 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986615176712 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938821104885 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200717823442 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101128441375 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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