One of the conspicuous trends today's world is colossal upsurge in number of people believing that in the cashless society people use more credit cards are very bad effect on financial situation. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in my essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. Most preponderant one is that the purpose of education is lead to self- fulfillment and there are numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can enhance productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting of chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned in the proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Beside, when only one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning attributes as dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of uses of credit cards.
In the views of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of people using credit cards are indeed too great to ignore.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...ore credit cards are very bad effect on there own financial situation. There is a widespr...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is will lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prosperity and excellence is concerned. Another pivotal factor in the aforementi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y are in favor of uses of credit cards. In the views of the arguments outlined a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75619834711 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66723613948 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6997597147 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.636363636 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208303007919 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688335789546 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928582715352 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187562788347 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842613384762 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...ore credit cards are very bad effect on there own financial situation. There is a widespr...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is will lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
^^^^
Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prosperity and excellence is concerned. Another pivotal factor in the aforementi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y are in favor of uses of credit cards. In the views of the arguments outlined a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75619834711 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66723613948 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6997597147 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.636363636 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208303007919 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688335789546 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928582715352 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187562788347 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842613384762 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.