you would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
You do NOT need to write any address
Dear Sir,
Warm regards! I am Munish Jazz, H.O.D English Department inscribing this epistle to anticipate my overwhelming curiosity for being participant at the Annual Teachers Seminar in London. Currently, i am holding this designation at Toronto School Of English Language and aspire to have an international exposure in global language by attending this seminar.
Since i have to commute overseas for appearing at this yearly workshop, thus it would be really a kind gesture of yours if you could apprise me with the schedule. Additionally, i request you to mail me the important dates of seminar with detailed description about each and every subdivided event. This is because i want to undergo all the minute exercises involved in the seminar and holds a strong devotion in amplification of my competencies.
Moreover, i will be very thankful to you if you could also acquaint me with the living expenses and other hidden costs involved while staying in London.Also, kindly text me the checklist of required documents and register me for the same if possible.I will be very thankful to you for your this aid.
Hope to have a prompt reply at your earlier convenience.
Yours Faithfully
Munish Jazz
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- you would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates program accommodation and cost You do NOT need to write any address 92
- Some people choose to eat no meat or fish They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole Discuss this view and give your own opinion 90
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life Use your own ideas knowledge and experience 89
- people spent alot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before is it a positive or negative development 89
- people spent alot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before is it a positive or negative development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
... Warm regards! I am Munish Jazz, H.O.D English Department inscribing this epis...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Teachers Seminar in London. Currently, i am holding this designation at Toronto ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ise me with the schedule. Additionally, i request you to mail me the important da...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...every subdivided event. This is because i want to undergo all the minute exercise...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ation of my competencies. Moreover, i will be very thankful to you if you cou...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
... costs involved while staying in London.Also, kindly text me the checklist of requir...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...nd register me for the same if possible.I will be very thankful to you for your t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, thus, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14646464646 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94614189511 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9830710796 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15767341473 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635498415328 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489519138321 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844978106782 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537626595627 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.