you would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program,
accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri dweller of Huston Road Texas U.S.A, penning this epistle to enquire about the seminar on 'Foreign Direct Investment in India' which is going to be take place in Dubai.
As per the invitational email I came to know that you would the manager of this seminar.Thus, it would be higly appreciable if you inform me about the date ,time and venue of this mega concert as well as who would be the guest speaker? Indeed, this seminar would be a life changing opportunity for enthusiascit youngsters.
Even though this seminar is for single day, the accommodation is imperative to get rid of jet lag. Therefore, Whether you would arrange the accommodation for attendees or i have to find it by myself. It would be highly grateful if you inform me about the cost of this seminar along with accommodation cost if it is arranged. Also, advise me about the mode of payment whether you would accept the cheque or online money transfer?
I am anticipating a positive response from yourside.
Yours sincerely,
Navdeep Puri
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...p Puri dweller of Huston Road Texas U.S.A, penning this epistle to enquire about ...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is going to be take place in Dubai. As per the invitational email I came to k...
^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... As per the invitational email I came to know that you would the manager of th...
^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...t you would the manager of this seminar.Thus, it would be higly appreciable if you i...
^^^^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...reciable if you inform me about the date ,time and venue of this mega concert as w...
^^
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pportunity for enthusiascit youngsters. Even though this seminar is for single d...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to find it by myself. It would be highly grateful if you inform me about the cost...
^^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rside. Yours sincerely, Navdeep Puri
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82417582418 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76951420144 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8348806176 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241873314852 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101852607848 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077496603262 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121812095212 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102810663473 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...p Puri dweller of Huston Road Texas U.S.A, penning this epistle to enquire about ...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is going to be take place in Dubai. As per the invitational email I came to k...
^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... As per the invitational email I came to know that you would the manager of th...
^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...t you would the manager of this seminar.Thus, it would be higly appreciable if you i...
^^^^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...reciable if you inform me about the date ,time and venue of this mega concert as w...
^^
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pportunity for enthusiascit youngsters. Even though this seminar is for single d...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to find it by myself. It would be highly grateful if you inform me about the cost...
^^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rside. Yours sincerely, Navdeep Puri
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82417582418 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76951420144 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8348806176 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241873314852 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101852607848 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077496603262 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121812095212 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102810663473 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.