Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from
your house’s flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologize
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Mr John,
I hope that you are doing well. I am writing this letter to apologise for the inconvenience caused
by the party held at our residence last Saturday night.
It was my parent's 50th wedding anniversary. It was very important and joyful celebration for
our family. You can imagine that in the current era it seems difficult to live with someone for
five years whereas my parents have accomplished 50 years of journey beautifully so far. I came
to invite your family and you for the party but the house was locked so I thought you might be
away for the weekend.
We had invited close friends and relatives only so there were not many people in the party.
However, the majority of the noise was due to children. We completely missed arranging
activities for kids due to the last moment arrangement. So, kids were just running and shouting
for fun. Moreover, the music was also bit louder and we realised very late that it might disturb
the neighbourhood. I would ensure that in future we could keep the music sound as low as
possible and surely arrange some fun games for kids who would keep them busy and less noisy.
Once again I would like to ask for an apology and guarantee you that it would not happen in
future.
Thank you for understanding,
Naazi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
... for fun. Moreover, the music was also bit louder and we realised very late that i...
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Line 15, column 90, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... guarantee you that it would not happen in future. Thank you for understanding, Naazi
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67400881057 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50692146719 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63436123348 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2132821607 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7857142857 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.29896907216 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18772536754 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606730167157 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062731626947 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626953973223 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714860987274 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.