Some people think that international news is more important than local news. Others argue that local news is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is a debatable matter that whether cosmopolitan’s news should be placed more emphasis or territorial’s news. Both sides of the argument present rational ideas which will be elaborated.
On the one hand, the proponent of local news assert that internal news is more important than external news. The most compelling reason justifying their ideas is that an individual’s life is only affected by local news not international one. They refute the meaningless boarder’s idea. For instance, the economics of a society is limited in its area and definitely is apart from world’s economics. Moreover, they notify that being away from cosmopolitan’s news make people waste their time and avert from their chief aim. To simply put, compatriots should be worried about their countries merely since they don’t have enough power and time to enhance whole world’s situation.
On the contrary, there are people who hold the opinion that the highly importance of international news is by no means negligible. To begin with, they notify that boarders are becoming exorbitantly dull day in, day out. All dwellers of the earth should be aware from world’s news since their lives would be definitely affected by it. Take internal stock market as an example which is highly impressed by the political situations of world wide. The last but not the least, technology has exceedingly progressed in recent years so that people on the earth has been living as a unique family. We have to cognize about the conditions of our family members disregarding their locations or racist discrimination and would let them a hand if they were in need.
To conclude, there are logical points on both sides. However, I am of the opinion that international news should be put more an emphasis. This is mainly because the absolute effect of technology which causes the boarders are getting worthless and all countries are deemed as a unique society that even menial event could pose a huge impact on others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...mpressed by the political situations of world wide. The last but not the least, technology...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...mpressed by the political situations of world wide. The last but not the least, technology...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, apart from, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11009174312 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85725775083 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581039755352 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0741527205 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2941176471 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294634351168 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099226422848 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136231513097 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180728604704 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565752498339 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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