Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while other thinks they should stay at home with family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Time has change to such extent that nowadays parent recommends their children to leave the house when they reach a specific age of adulthood but few people hold the opinion that they should stay with the family. I tend to incline with parents who ask their children to leave home after a period of time.
As per our cultural ethic are concerned, it is said that in the early age children are responsibility of the parent but parent become responsibility for the children they become old and vulnerable. However, time has taken a great turn now parent allow their children to become independent and leave the home after achieving certain age. For example, in western countries children are asked to be independent after they attain the age of 14 or pay rent if, they want to stay with parents. This step taken by parents help them to know the world outside the comfort zone provided by the parents face and tackle the difficult, hard situation which will mend them in good citizen. Furthermore, they will get to know the important of money, can taste their first income happiness and can even save for study or their future such as marriage or new enterprise. Hence, this model helps them in becoming financial and emotional independent.
On the other hand, the children who live with parent are culturally well strong and more emotionally attached with the parent. They value relationships over the money and personal privacy hence, it mean they have to sacrifice their personal privacy. Most convenient example is India, here people stay with parents even after attain age of 30 at the cost of their privacy.
To conclude, being living independent, away from parent teaches children to be strong enough to tackle different problems and know the value of money. However, staying with parents after certain age, cost personal privacy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...sk their children to leave home after a period of time. As per our cultural ethic are concern...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'means'?
Suggestion: means
...he money and personal privacy hence, it mean they have to sacrifice their personal p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93225806452 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49534217498 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545161290323 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.041743877 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251190216739 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100022261574 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060076786609 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170977774718 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718449436047 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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