In some countries the quality of life in large cities is declining.
Why do you think this is happening? What measures can be taken to stop it?
The quality of life is deteriorating in big cities of various nations. The ever increasing inflation and overpopulation are the primary reasons behind it. However, various steps can be taken to control this decline.
To begin with, people are continuously drifting from rural to urban areas in the search of a job and because of all the latest amenities present in the short distance, they decide to settle in the cities only. This consequently results in, contamination and shortage of drinking water, air, and noise pollution because of the increase in a vehicle on road hence, each and every road has become overloaded with traffic. The overpopulation has increased the demand for the product and rents which in turn resulted in inflation and to meet the family basic needs one has to work overtime and do not get enough time to enjoy with the family. The inadequate rest time results in stress, brain hemorrhage and cancer like issues because of pollution.
However, these problems can be curbed by acting or certain plan such as the government should generate optimum job opportunities in the rural areas which definitely help in dismissing their migration rate. Apart from this, people should be encouraged to use public vehicles instead of private by levying steep tax on personal vehicles. Additionally, the government should make legislation that can assure that one needs not to work overtime to earn bread and increase their salaries. Moreover, they should have enough time for other recreational activities which can make them fit.
To conclude, the standard of living in the urban area is getting worse due to the drastic increase in the number of people and has increased the problems like unhealthy environment and high life expenditures in large cities. However, some measures should be taken to such as by motivating people to use public transport instead of private and making law for the working class salaries are an apt example to attain the required results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1226993865 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72373983775 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6539315155 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.461538462 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150358656528 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562622886947 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547945003214 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101982079081 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566231390895 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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