These days, mobile phones are being an inseparable part of our life. We almost start days with our cellphone's ringing and continue it with its applications. In this essay, we take a look at how much these devices affect our daily life? First, take a glance at the pros and cons of it and at the end try to have a suitable conclusion.
The first and most important advantage of mobile phones that it is accessibility. That means we have a better and easier connection with other people, whenever we want to. And this would help us to contact others in a comfortable and suitable situation. Also, we can find new friends all around the world by connecting with the internet we have in our cellphones.
The other advantage of mobile phones is their wide and various kind of applications. we use them to alarm us and get us up from bed, remind us of our meetings and works. We can listen to music or read books in our pastime or capture a picture with our cellphone's camera easily. And all these things are because of our mobile phone facilities.
On the other side, these little devices have their own disadvantages. For example, a cellphone can make our body and our mind lazy. When we use our mobile for memorizing things instead of our mind or use the reminder to remind us, these things make our brain lazy and powerless.
Also, these devices can be addictive and make users spend too much time. For example, games or social networking both can be addictive and spending to much time on them are harmful.
To sum up, these cellphones have both advantages and disadvantages and their effects could be different for anyone. Personally, I think in spite of these bads effects these devices can be helpful for us.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: DiemHongnguyen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... wide and various kind of applications. we use them to alarm us and get us up from...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...king both can be addictive and spending to much time on them are harmful. To sum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, for example, i think, kind of, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60784313725 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57487308008 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4156259746 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.2105263158 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253535791198 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914040946361 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939727074795 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128612888543 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835073438394 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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