Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives

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the mobile phone is considered the quickest means of communication
the mobile phone is considered as the quickest means of communication

the mobile phone is also many disadvantage
the mobile phone has also many disadvantages

telephone user become to addicted their mobile phone if they are too depends on
telephone users become addicted to their mobile phones if they are too depending on

it not only influence on study results, makes students distraction but also it is cause of disease about eyes
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if we use it true purpose
if we use its true purpose

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Nowadays, the mobile phone plays a major role in our lives, which brings many benefits to us but also contains some drawbacks. Both these sides will be discussed in this essay.

Generally, the mobile phone will certainly bring about a lot of advantages. First of all, the mobile phone is considered the quickest means of communication in our daily life, we can contact easily with our friends and our relative wherever by calling or sending messages. Second, the mobile phone is also a means of entertainment for people. We can listen to music and play games on mobile phone. Moreover, by using the latest apps for smartphones, we can access to the internet to watch Film and check our profile in social networks and update our status wherever we are. Finally, If we have a smartphone in hand, our studying becomes more effective such as looking up dictionary, find out many sources of reference on the internet which is useful for studying.

On the other hand, the mobile phone is also many disadvantages. First, telephone user becomes addicted their mobile phone if they are too dependent on it, moreover, the ability of human communication is limited if the mobile phone is more present in some event such as class meetings, on the bus, in the park…some people only focus on their phone without communicating. The use of mobile phones too much will make people take a lot of time, it not only influence on study results, makes students distraction but also it is a cause of disease about eyes. Finally, we shouldn't use a mobile phone while we are driving because it can lead to traffic accidents.

In conclusion, mobile phone is necessary for our modern lives today. However, it is helpful or not, which depends on our ways of using it. It will be better if we use it true purpose and at an appropriate time.