Your local hospital has advertised people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
• explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
• say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
• give details of when you would be available for this work
Dear Sir,
My name is jot and I am residing in the opposite building of the hospital. I am writing this to enquire about the advertisement given by the hospital for volunteer workers and I would like to apply for it.
I am a nursing student and have completed B.Sc (nursing and internship with Fortis hospital) last year. Additionally, I am working as a nurse in the civil hospital of our locality for six months.
I am usually free during my evening hours after 5:00 to 8:00 pm and being a nursing student, I have adequate knowledge of how to handle the patients and give them medicine. Apart from the educational background, I have experience in this field which can be an asset to your hospital. I am very curious about my passion and always ready to assist others.
I hope you will accept me as a volunteer worker. I look forward to hearing positive from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sc
... a nursing student and have completed B.Sc nursing and internship with Fortis hosp...
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Line 9, column 50, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u will accept me as a volunteer worker. I look forward to hearing positive from y...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64596273292 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69142697749 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6183853603 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170901023233 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674299682464 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593853125813 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954337277871 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465211024911 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.