With all the problems in the world today, some people think that spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money can be better spent on other causes. What is your opinion?
Recently, some people think that putting money on space adventure is a complete waste and the money should be spent on other problems. For me, i think it is true for some aspect. The world we are living today is not a perfect and safety world that some issues such as climate changed, economics problem, natural resources problem and are occurring and so on. Just one simple problem that is the gap between the rich and the poor has not been solved completely. And the money should be used to solve these kind of problem instead of invest in luxurious things. space exploration is considered innovation in the ability and knowledge of human to do the research in the space. but the spaces is the place that we can not live in, it is not seem to have more effects on our lives.it will not meaningful if we can get into the space but the Earth, where we live is facing with the exhaustion of natural resources and human being are gradually die. the money we have must use to improve the life of people are under difficult living conditions. though the research about the space give scientist useful information and answer the question about cosmic of many researcher and give more knowledge to many people as well. How ever, because the money is limited so let use it rationally and only when we can solved all the problems in the world should we think about the space exploration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, i think, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5421686747 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37101576941 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2148629991 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.1 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34231362371 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133117823296 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110793943085 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34231362371 0.151304729494 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.