There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have
children.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this
Undoubtedly , there is an escalating vogue among couples not to have children. Even though without children the financial woes of married couples would be disappeared still they have to face a severe depression and anxiety in later phases of their lives due to lack of emotional support.
Since the decision of not having children in the life would make them free from financial worries, thus they would have hefty disposable income. Seemingly, the burgeoning cost of up bring of children in terms of medical health and education of young ones would save the colossal amount of funds. Also It is biased to overlook the facts documented by
the Harvard University that spurt in cost of living in American and lack of financial stability has pushed newly married couples to follow 'No Child' policy in their lives. Therefore, Being a parents, people have to spend a lion share of their income in the upbringing of their offspring and they continuously struggle to endow them luxurious lives
However, one of the inevitable demerits is that the deprivation of emotional support of children in the grey period of life make the grey people prone to severe mental disorders. Love and affection which parents could get from their beloved children acts as isolation buster. Consequently, they do not need to rely on other medical treatments in order to
get rid of depression. To exemplify, as per the survey carried out by New York Times, in the gone calendar year, American denizens who are living without children are more likely to face acute anxiety and depression in their life and even a majority commits suicide owing to mounting up of mental stress.
In conclusion, although the populace who does not have children have more financial liberty, the privation of children love life would turn them mental patients. A progeny ensure the sense of contentment among parents and bless them healthy and long life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03144654088 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59277403121 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4329652436 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.454545455 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158207779178 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070285553412 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632535880615 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085104888657 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549089876545 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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