Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.
No one can deny that technology affects the society positively in the last century. As, there are many employees work from home, there are diverse benefits through distance working. I am of the belief that working from home benefits outweigh its merits. Both ideas would be explained below in this essay.
To begin with, the opponents of working from home assumed that it saves expenses which is payed on transportation. This means that many agencies and companies may less the salaries of their workers, because they can spend this money in different aspects. For instance, HP agency implement the strategy of distance working in last year which achieve more profits than previous years. Hence, it can be said that companies should less the number of employees and depend on the influential persons that may work from home speedily and efficiently.
On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that working from home leads to a higher percentage of unemployment. This is because that many companies release a huge number of their workers in order to achieve more profits and much savings. According to an article in the Guardian, which illustrates the idea that many families all over the world suffer from the lack of funds due to the shortage of jobs in many sectors. Thus, Governments should intervene and put strict regulations in order to less the burdens come from unemployment.
In conclusion, after this essay has manifested the above-mentioned views, it can be reiterated that working from home become a need in the last new decade and governments should observe the misuse of power by multinational companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10408921933 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.722362475 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9756817634 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272666315282 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107494903196 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836718993671 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174331576879 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526035797086 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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